Has there been a time when you’ve had a long-cherished or accepted belief challenged?How did you respond?How did the challenge affect your beliefs?

Has there been a time when you’ve had a long-cherished or accepted belief challenged?How did you respond?How did the challenge affect your beliefs?

This is a college essay and can be from 500 – 650 words long. The question is typed above in the Paper title section. There is a rough draft attached. It is too lengthy and in very rough form. This essay is for application to the University of Texas at Austin. If in your opinion this essay is to bland, feel free to add to it or request more interesting and relevant info.