In Draft 1 you explained someone else’s argument. Now take that Draft and revise it so that it is about what you think about that argument or a specific claim/idea from the argument.

Your new revised draft should:

Revise Draft 1, making it easier to read, more accurate, more specific, etc.
Consider instructor feedback on Draft 1 to identify places that could be improved and decide how to do so. You don’t have to do exactly as the feedback suggests, you may decide that doing something else will better fit your new draft.

Explain one specific idea from one of the academic course texts. Explain whether you think that idea supports, contradicts, or changes what you think about the original argument.